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Offline La_Thumbelina

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You inspired me
« on: February 13, 2003, 01:41:34 pm »
First of all, you all can replace "Friend, You," with whomever you want.  

Secondly, you all have inspired me to rhyme, which I have NEVER done.  I am also positive, which I have never been.  Thank you all and I hope you enjoy my poem.
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Dear Friend,

I have stumbled over a comforting world within.
Which I feel endless tides of people's emotions.
I see they share my hatred that I hold selfishly in.
Without fear, I catch their waves, and ride the motions.

I journey through their tearful storms of pain.
And share the darkness that eats them from inside.
It begins from their heart, working to their veins.
Rushing to their thoughts, making sure love has died.

During my adventure, I am sure You understand,
In this same world, darkness is also forced to hide.
I've witnessed the gray clouds disappear as planned,
And You're holding my peers, leaving everything aside.

Many times, I've cursed You for not listening to me.
I've asked, why leave me alone to fearfully drown?
But being here, I have realized, You've never let me be.
From above, like a parent, you've been looking down.

When needed, you would hand me nails of bravery.
Making sure, when I fall, I learn to build a faithful boat.
Now I have sketches to share, so my peers can ride safely.
Then, I get on my knees and thank you for keeping us afloat.

If it wasn't for this world I have stumbled across,
I would not have experienced You teaching me,
That in our chaotic lives, we are never lost.
You are always there, watching us so carefully.

With Love,
ME



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Re: You inspired me
« Reply #1 on: February 13, 2003, 07:04:25 pm »
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that is great. I am always happy to read happy poetry from someone who in the past has always written sad poems. i believe it is a great step forward in your writing as well is in your life.

--Sal- 8)
« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 09:00:00 pm by 1064646000 »

Offline gb_cmt

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Re: You inspired me
« Reply #2 on: February 17, 2003, 09:04:19 am »
I'm happy to see you back and lettingus know how you feel.  Its always great to see your poems ans thanks for what you wrote to me earlier.
 [smiley=angel.gif]  Thanks
« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 09:00:00 pm by 1064646000 »