Remember Me--- please comment

[angel_skye]

Daddy, I love you!
Where have you gone?
I can't see you.
I hear your voice,
yet I do not see you.
I'm floating over my body.
What's happening to me?
Why is mommy crying,
I see the family so sad.
What happened on that sad night?
I see a great, bright light.
Should I go?
Should I cross the larde gate?
The voice I hear tells me your will be fine.
That I will see you from there. I asked
"Where am I?", he told me heaven. I can
sit and wait under the pretty trees, sell the sweet aroma of the roses, and wait for you to come with me.
Please always remember me, and that I will always love you. Even if I am no longer there next to you.

by: APS

[admin]

ah, stop it, you gave me chills.

[gb_cmt]

ah, stop it, you gave me chills.

Thats great  [smiley=curtain.gif]

[Rob]

Alot of poetry going on in this site ............kinda Cool.


'' That is Poetry Mal '' [smiley=2gunsfiring_v1.gif]

[filter_78745]

That was great. Full of emotion, very visual.

You did a good job with this piece.  :)