A blur

[nelda]

[i am invisioning myself with you
hand in hand, but you're far away
and i can't reach you
for everytime i try, you slip away
further and further
and you leave me wanting your touch
you have captured my heart but you're a ghost in my mind
a vision, an image....
and i can't picture being without you
but how can i make love to someone who is just
a blur.....
I CAN'T

[gb_cmt]

They say visions fortell things to come,
so be patient little one.
Love is not to long away but don't be fool by the ones that are just pretend,
 for true love will never go away

[filter_78745]

Always a good response.

Nelda, I liked this one. But, not as much as "I thought". Maybe if I read it a little more my views might change. Overall, I would probably rate it a six....maybe.

Not that my opinion matters but there it is. :)

[gb_cmt]

poetry can be many thing and its meaning for always be like the sands, for we are unique individuals.