i thought

[nelda]

i think i thought i heard you calling when the rain was dropping on my face; but i didn't turn and answer you, the pain was more than i could take...
that night i thought i heard you crying while i stood out in the lonely dark;  or maybe it was my imagination, messing with the feelings in my heart....
i thought we would last forever like two white doves flying free through the air;  and nothing could've come between us not as long as i was there....
but i've realized i think too muchand had too much hope in what the future brought; but for once in my life i was not alone.... or at least that's what i thought!!!

by: NeLdA ;-P

[gb_cmt]

It was not your imagination...
For I cryed and cryed while you disapear in the dark,    
  For lonely is not who I want to be
     nor just a simple thought.
But I do recall that night as rain was  falling on my face for I wish  upon star and your name outlowd I cryed...
I'm sorry for I hurt you in many ways
For I never thought that we would ever end
  For love they told me last till the bitter end.
Now that I see how you feel for me there is no more to say but I'm sorry...
         Sorry for I thought wewouldbe together,
                                       together till the end....   [smiley=curtain.gif]

[filter_78745]

Good poem Nelda. Nice feeling. A lot of emotion. I visualized it all. Very good.

Nice response gb_cmt. :D

[gb_cmt]

Glad you liked it and that u have read most of the poems, hope u enjoyed them.