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Offline ED

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« on: May 08, 2003, 04:58:33 pm »
Of all the poems that I wrote to her, this simple one made her cry.

As I turned I felt a burn, as I fell
I could not see, I was let free, as I fell
There was a pain that would remain, as I fell
As I fell in Love with You.
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Re: Huh....
« Reply #1 on: May 08, 2003, 07:55:09 pm »
Hey Ed ...i cant come up with any poems like that ........especialy one that will make her cry  [smiley=bigcry.gif] ................. I Just go to Coach House @ the mall and pick out a card.
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Re: Huh....
« Reply #2 on: May 08, 2003, 11:12:57 pm »
that is poetry...
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Re: Huh....
« Reply #3 on: September 14, 2003, 04:46:03 pm »
;)Nice, hope to see more!
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