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May 08, 2003, 01:58:33 PM Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 06:00:00 PM by 1064646000
Of all the poems that I wrote to her, this simple one made her cry.

As I turned I felt a burn, as I fell
I could not see, I was let free, as I fell
There was a pain that would remain, as I fell
As I fell in Love with You.
If you’re on the right track, don’t just sit there, you may get run over.

Rob

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May 08, 2003, 04:55:09 PM Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 06:00:00 PM by 1064646000
Hey Ed ...i cant come up with any poems like that ........especialy one that will make her cry  [smiley=bigcry.gif] ................. I Just go to Coach House @ the mall and pick out a card.
" These Five Words in my Head ,...... Scream out ........... ? ? "

admin

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May 08, 2003, 08:12:57 PM Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 06:00:00 PM by 1064646000
that is poetry...

gb_cmt

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September 14, 2003, 01:46:03 PM Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 06:00:00 PM by 1064646000
;)Nice, hope to see more!
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