Like on Old Toy

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gb_cmt

January 28, 2003, 06:11:07 AM Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 06:00:01 PM by -1
One day, that day,
the day that I'll never forget.
I was like a new toy placed on the window,
just looking for someone,
someone to make me feel loved
and to give love to,and so you came..

Looking at your eyes
I felt loved and comfort,
I felt like we were meant to be,
and so you took me home
and you made me feel wanted, needed "loved"...

One day, that day,
the day that I will never forget.
You came play with me for the last time...
I heard you smile
and it made me feel like a new toy
but suddenly you looked at me
and with a smile said," Thank you ",
and you put me away.

Rob

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January 28, 2003, 07:05:35 AM Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 06:00:00 PM by 1064646000
That is poetry .  Very good .  I liked it. ;D
" These Five Words in my Head ,...... Scream out ........... ? ? "

filter_78745

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July 29, 2003, 05:04:01 AM Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 06:00:00 PM by 1064646000
Pretty cool. It makes me feel sad in some parts.  :-[
"I find it funny when people act like they don't care. Then, ask about you every second." ~ ME


ROCK ON!!!!

AMANDA G.

gb_cmt

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September 14, 2003, 01:23:00 PM Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 06:00:00 PM by 1064646000
It's  nice to see people still come to read what i write

admin

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September 15, 2003, 04:22:43 AM Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 06:00:00 PM by 1064646000
glad to see you came back!
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