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Offline nelda

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i thought
« on: September 04, 2002, 12:27:26 pm »
i think i thought i heard you calling when the rain was dropping on my face; but i didn't turn and answer you, the pain was more than i could take...
that night i thought i heard you crying while i stood out in the lonely dark;  or maybe it was my imagination, messing with the feelings in my heart....
i thought we would last forever like two white doves flying free through the air;  and nothing could've come between us not as long as i was there....
but i've realized i think too muchand had too much hope in what the future brought; but for once in my life i was not alone.... or at least that's what i thought!!!

by: NeLdA ;-P
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Re: i thought
« Reply #1 on: January 23, 2003, 09:38:28 am »
It was not your imagination...
 For I cryed and cryed while you disapear in the dark,    
   For lonely is not who I want to be
      nor just a simple thought.
But I do recall that night as rain was  falling on my face for I wish  upon star and your name outlowd I cryed...
I'm sorry for I hurt you in many ways
 For I never thought that we would ever end
   For love they told me last till the bitter end.
Now that I see how you feel for me there is no more to say but I'm sorry...
          Sorry for I thought wewouldbe together,
                                        together till the end....   [smiley=curtain.gif]
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Re: i thought
« Reply #2 on: July 29, 2003, 07:45:45 am »
Good poem Nelda. Nice feeling. A lot of emotion. I visualized it all. Very good.

Nice response gb_cmt. :D
« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 09:00:00 pm by 1064646000 »
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Re: i thought
« Reply #3 on: September 14, 2003, 04:44:14 pm »
Glad you liked it and that u have read most of the poems, hope u enjoyed them.
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