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Title: confusion from within
Post by: stacy on August 23, 2002, 10:55:21 AM
                   "Confusion From Within"

There's a creature inside me,
evil and dark.
helongs to break free,
he burns like a spank.

He dresses in black,
there's anger in store,
he never looks back,
he makes me sore.

I feel afraid
of this one inside.
I wish to run away,
I want to hide.

But he calls to me.
He draws me in.
I'll never be free
I drink of him.

His eyes are pools
of darkness to me.
I play the fool,
of this I see.

He causes me strain,
but yet this treasure,
erases the pain,
and gives me pleasure.

His lips upon mine
taste sickly sweet.
Similar to wine,
which is not a drink, but meat.

He is of the night,
this creature of strife.
he tries with all his might
to steal away my life.

Yet I want him...
I swear...
to obey his whim,
of this I dare.

I cherish the moments,
the darkness this night.
I await the time;
he takes away my might.

I bow down to his will
and, yet,
he still
can make me forget:

His darkness,
wickedness,
evilness
that cause me distress.

There's a creature inside me,
dark and black,
he longs for me
and I long for him back.
Title: Re: confusion from within
Post by: admin on August 26, 2002, 07:58:44 PM
woah, i really like this one.


makes me think of vampires!
Title: Re: confusion from within
Post by: gb_cmt on January 24, 2003, 11:40:55 AM


What might this creature be
For a have seen a set of eyes which looked back from with in
but i wonder...
is this my creature looking to get loose
is this myself looking for an outlet
is this something else darker.

A crature of the dark.
Today it spoke to me an my way home,
" Why you wonder about me when you know who I'm.
For you know what I'm,
you might be able to fool every one but I know you and
seen you..."

And as I walk I wonder is this true,
Am I this creature ...
who in the dark lives
who life is no more that to...


For every one has a creature with in..
Title: Re: confusion from within
Post by: filter_78745 on July 29, 2003, 04:58:02 AM
Agree with Sal. LOVE IT! :D