Of all the poems that I wrote to her, this simple one made her cry.
As I turned I felt a burn, as I fell
I could not see, I was let free, as I fell
There was a pain that would remain, as I fell
As I fell in Love with You.
Hey Ed ...i cant come up with any poems like that ........especialy one that will make her cry [smiley=bigcry.gif] ................. I Just go to Coach House @ the mall and pick out a card.
that is poetry...
;)Nice, hope to see more!