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Title: Like on Old Toy
Post by: gb_cmt on January 28, 2003, 06:11:07 AM

One day, that day,
the day that I'll never forget.
I was like a new toy placed on the window,
just looking for someone,
someone to make me feel loved
and to give love to,and so you came..

Looking at your eyes
I felt loved and comfort,
I felt like we were meant to be,
and so you took me home
and you made me feel wanted, needed "loved"...

One day, that day,
the day that I will never forget.
You came play with me for the last time...
I heard you smile
and it made me feel like a new toy
but suddenly you looked at me
and with a smile said," Thank you ",
and you put me away.

Title: Re: Like on Old Toy
Post by: Rob on January 28, 2003, 07:05:35 AM

That is poetry . Very good . I liked it. ;D

Title: Re: Like on Old Toy
Post by: filter_78745 on July 29, 2003, 05:04:01 AM

Pretty cool. It makes me feel sad in some parts. :-[

Title: Re: Like on Old Toy
Post by: gb_cmt on September 14, 2003, 01:23:00 PM

It's nice to see people still come to read what i write

Title: Re: Like on Old Toy
Post by: admin on September 15, 2003, 04:22:43 AM

glad to see you came back!

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